3 What's the Time Mr. Wolf? (continued)
I was still a long way from the road into our estate
and I’d never reach it before the thing caught me. My chest burned, my legs felt like lead, and
stumbling off the kerb at the road junction I turned into the deserted High
Street, looking desperately for somewhere to hide.
Seeing a small shopping arcade, I dived into it, but
it soon came to a dead end. Looking
frantically around, I noticed the grocer’s shop doorway furthest from the
street and threw myself down on the icy step. Pressing my back against the door, I heard a
tremendous crash above my head, a startled squawk, something heavy sliding
rapidly down the roof tiles, and then a horrible silence.
Was it the gargoyle? Had the creature fallen off the roof? Where was it? I started to imagine it shuffling towards me
with its ugly wings scraping the floor. I
looked along the arcade, but it was too dark to see. The shops had closed for the night and there
was only one light left on in the post office window.
I had to keep calm – think what to do. It might be ages before my stepmother wondered
where I was. She’d look for Thomas, but
he would be safe home by now having his tea, the gargoyle wasn’t chasing him. I
wondered if Thomas would tell his mum what had happened to me. Even if he did she wouldn’t believe him, she’d
think he was making up another of his pretend stories.
I listened but couldn’t hear a thing. It had been quiet for a long time. I was
beginning to hope the frightening creature had given up searching for me and
had gone back to the church, but I had to find out. I couldn’t stay there much longer for I was
freezing to the step. If I crept quietly
along the arcade, I might be able to take a quick look into the street without
the gargoyle seeing me, but what if the thing was still out there, waiting to
grab me?
Struggling to stand, my body so cold it was painful
to move, I heard running footsteps coming towards me, something cannoned into
me, and I fell backwards, banging my head on the floor. A cord wrapped tight round my neck, and as I
fought to free myself I heard a small fierce voice say, ‘Let go, Alice, it’s my
shoe bag.’
Cursing under my breath, I pulled the string of
Thomas’s bag from my throat. Hissing at
him to keep quiet, I clamped my hand over his mouth and he bit me. Dragging my
hand away, I was angrily shaking him when I heard high-pitched, excited
squeakings.
‘Now look what you’ve done,’ I whispered fiercely. ‘You’ve brought more of them, there’s more
than one gargoyle on the roof now!’
‘Let’s shout for them to go away,’ Thomas said.





16 comments:
wow - intriguing! I just wanted to say thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment over at my blog. How wonderful and I would love to know what that experiment is? I have just written a new a rambling post with a give-away over at mine too - we must have crossed over in the writings!
Good luck with more experiments for 2013 too then!
Amelia.x
Those gargoyles can be pesky things, I've encounted some in my stories too. Enjoyed reading this, Carole.
Thanks, Amelia, not really an experiment, this time I've decided to stop publishing my children's novels after the present one and finish a book for grown-ups. Then I shall send it out, I'm tired of doing everything myself, I need more time to write :0), and 2013 will be spent looking for a publisher! x
Thank you so much, Suzanne, I used to take children to the church in the story for environmental study work and they made clay models of the gargoyles. So now they are in the story and the children who read the book and live in the county can visit the church and see the different story characters. :0)
What fun! I've always been fascinated by gargoyles.
Fascinating story! Enjoyed reading this.
Carole, how fun! And what a perfect kind of monster--they're so scary.
You would have loved to be with my children on their study trips to Tong Church Christine, drawing the gargoyles sitting on the porch roof and making models of them in clay.
Thank you Nas for your kind support of my writing.
Thank you, JoLynne, as you know, writing is a very lonely occupation without reader comments.
This is wonderful, Carole! Had me on the edge of my seat. Sounds like quite a story and quite an adventure. Can't wait to read more.
That was an interesting and fun read! Glad you shared it with us. :)
I love it! What a fun story and very engaging. Creepy, too, with the gargoyles coming more at the end... eeep!!! :D <3
Thank you so much, Joylene, I do hope that this year will be when I find an agent or publisher - so that I can concentrate more upon my writing! :0)
Thank you, Karen. I live in hope of one day finding someone to promote my work. Shall keep working towards this. :0)
Thanks so much, Leigh, I'm so pleased you enjoyed my children's story.
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